The 95% positive comes from an overwhelming consensus from the class about what my drawing was trying to say. They nailed it and then some. While I was listening to them discuss my drawing I was still realizing more symbolism within my drawing that I didn't even try to do yet it supported the meaning. That's one very beautiful thing about mixed media - anything's possible.
The 5% negative comes from a couple comments about the use of text in my drawing - whether it was really effective or necessary. I agree and I disagree. I think the drawing would have been just as beautiful without the text and maybe it would have even been better because not having text would allow the figure to be the only focus. The figure was very beautifully done so I can see why one would not want the text there to compete. Also, using text in a drawing, in general, isn't very widely supported among artists. I can see why that is. It's hard to make it work/do it right. But then I disagree because of the reason why the text is in there. The text is in there to enforce the meaning behind the drawing and to create an uncontrollable texture. I wrote the poem; the poem maps my thoughts and it shows so much emotion. The words enforce the feeling of the drawing and allow the viewer to have a more concrete idea of what's really going on. Maybe it's not necessary, I'm not exactly sure.
Overall, I was/am very pleased with how the critique went. In the future just as in the past, I probably won't use much text in my drawings but if I do, I'll have a better idea for how to do it.
Let Out - Acrylic, Chalk Pastels, Charcoal (9' by 5') |
Sandra,
ReplyDeleteCongrats congrats. Your outlook on life & critique is successful of non-attachment. This comes from the hindu idea of letting go of the physical, not worrying about external influences. Congratulations, you are on your path to nirvana. :)
No really, the piece turned out very fine. The overall, appearance is successful with the words and create many awe-inspiring MOMENTS. I think you heard most of my feedback all throughout the process. One of my favorite parts which origins all the way back to your small sketch is the choice of color- browns and blues, blacks and whites: you really made them work. If I were to do anything with the text, I would not take it out or change the 'quick', haphazard character, I would space each word closer together.
I think you had the best work in the class for this project. It is obvious looking at the results that you were very conscious of your decision making during your process. I love the colors, textures, depth, tension, the way you drew the body, and the way your added the text. I was disappointed in other people's feedback and thought they were being overly critical out of jealousy. I am very impressed and would buy this piece from you if I could afford it lol. When I first saw your work it inspired me to work hard to create artwork of the same caliber, but I have yet to do so. Keep up the good work!
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